The How's My Driving? Meme

I would really appreciate it if anyone could give me some serious crit on Sylarface. ;; I know that he can be a very difficult character to portray without going overboard in either direction, and though I've been excited about the events he's been going through recently in damned and the development they've been allowing me to do with him, I don't want to go down an S3 road and screw things up with too much emo and not enough evil. So... yeah. D8 Been really worried about that, and I'll gratefully take any comments, critiques, suggestions – anything! I'd love anything. <3333

ALSO I GOT A NEW PHONE ALIAS 2 WOOOOOOOO